this is actually a freestyle...

[imakillunow]

yo yo yo this battle is now over
he da same cat dat goes to da gay clubs and bends over
my names jesse, and i spit hard all day
f***** guy you should be on stage with B2K
y'all think you got tupac, biggie, and dre's back all set up
but you can't spit dawg so u best not get up
cause i know them rappers coast to coast
front and wide to the pohcahnos
i'm ill when i spit and i rock them clothes
punks piss me off and get a broken nose
i party on da beach till the ocean close
my dawgs in da hood and we acting up
i gotta party wit you boo dats whats up
i'm in da bed wit a b**** n**** dats wats up
saying down down baby i'm wit da ladies
i've been ballin like since the 80's
i'm in da hood with a black tint mercedes
wit a girl, havin mah babies

dat it. what y'all think?

[Nurika]

Ermmm...what can I say? Sounds more like Rap lyrics to me.

[imakillunow]

lol well, it IS a freestyle(read title) are we allowed to post freestyles in here? if nto, i'll try to find a way to delete that one.
i jes thought cuz rap is basically poetry iwth a beat to it that it would count as poetry

[Lina]

"a cat in the trees a bird in the sky, my luv for u shall never die"
"if only we could stay together, our love would be like clear weather"
"look at the rose of life, it will be like my heart was cut with a knife"

it stinks i know

[Nurika]

No, it doesn't stink, I just think you should add more. And, I think you should make a new theard for each poetry you post up.

[punkster267]

Lina, ur freestyles hot. i think its awesome. keep writting at least u have one fan.

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